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Let's walk Together
Just for a while
You Speaking from the Corner of your eye
While me being lost in you and your smile
With breeze your tresses, caressing your cheeks
And me putting it aside,every time it kisses your lips
My finger Sometime touching the finger of your hand
And me wishing for time to still stand
Me Drowsing in the drop
that had touched you so dearly
And envying every air molecule
that even touches you merely
Understanding your silence and you
knowing the part of you I didn't know

Let's walk a little longer
Just towards the forever
where 'me' and 'you'
Become 'us'
And vanishes once for all.


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  1. So, romantic...carefully chosen words. Get going....

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    1. Thanks Sayantini .. Keep Visiting :)

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  2. Very nice poem , reminded me of someone from the past. I wish that becoming ''us'' should be more common in this world full of automaton kind of people. Sorry for sounding cynical but that is truth of the present time.Anyways coming back to the poem i liked this line the most" My finger Sometime touching the finger of your hand And me wishing for time to still stand " , this is actually the first step in early days after you fell in love.

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    1. Thanks .. Was just trying to write from initial to end in short .. keep visiting :)

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  3. Wonderful poem Ankur, you are one of the best at love poems.
    You Speaking from the Corner of your eye
    While me being lost in you and your smile
    These are just so innocent lines full of purity.
    And the last stanza truly denotes eternal love.. :)

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    1. Thanks Kislaya .. Ah! that coming from a blogger like you means a lot :)

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  4. Lovely! the intense feeling with with u have written it as beautifully become the very essence of the poem :)

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    1. Thanks .. for so intense comment :) keep visiting !

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  5. wow this is so romantic... :)

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  6. Today I read this again... yet so refreshing!
    Beautiful poem Ankur keep writing.

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  7. Lovely Ankur! I love reading about Love the way you define it. Do keep writing for us more and more.

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    1. thanks .. keep reading i will keep writing :)

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  8. Kuch Dur tum chalo Kuch Dur hum chale phir..Phir kya Rickshaw kar lenge.. :p
    Joke hai Ankur Bhai.. :-)
    But as I always as your Poems are very romantic and each and every time I read your Poems,the Romantic me gets inspired..x-) cheer

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    1. oh rickshaw .. aasman sai sidha jaamen pe le aaye tum to usko :P .. 8-) ..btw thanks .. :)

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  9. Magnificent !!
    looks like an old post recently posted !

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  10. Lovely poem. Simple words so effectively used :)

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  11. You should seriously think of sending your lines to greeting card companies.
    Truly beautiful lines.

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  12. Beautiful words Ankur. And I agree with Indrani above :)

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  13. Just one of the poems you would like to read again and again ! that was some good composition !

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  14. Aww that was quite cute. Very beautifully written too :)

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  15. Wow....superb write!! Romantic, mushy, tingling!

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  16. Really beautiful, Ankur! May everyone get to experience such walk :)

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  17. Very beautiful indeed. Lovely lines.

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