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dreampath


One fragment of thought, sparks the flame 
tearing through my veins, soon become a conflagration
Burning within a desire to create a masterpiece, 
to excel, for one time, never cease 
Waking up every morning, with a flicker of inspiration
Walking thru the burning Pyre, falling, failing,
trying to shape my dream, sometime selling 
it in lieu of better dreams
but every time
I see reality as a fault of my dreams
Truth seems to be an ally of stuff  forbidden
Where shall I begin my search for thou?
Which Road to travel, to make a difference?
So many question, whose answer 
exist as a shadow of reality
determined to cleaves this interstellar gloom
Moving on, but every time 
I watch miles on the end, 
Meet Jaded me and the emptiness




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  1. only the journey is ours....the destination where He leads us...but yes...that burning desire to excel is what we must never let go off.... masterpiece Ankur! Bravo!

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    1. yeah desire should never let go off ! Thank you so much :)

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  2. Reality is harsh yet one must try to excel. Good lines Ankur.

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  3. Inspiring lines Ankur.... i have never taken life so seriously.... (b)

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    1. thank you so much .. :) neither you should take it .. a bright bubbly character suits some people very well :)

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  4. Lovely lines with profound meaning.

    How real is reality? A fault of my dreams?

    What is truth? Can i change truths?

    Very interesting questions.

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    1. Thank you ! i hope even answer to be like that :)

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  5. The emptiness is so painful...it cuts deep into you, it creates hollowness deep within. I know what it feels like.

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    1. yeah that's like that only .. thank you for reading :)

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  6. Stay true to ourselves and we will ultimately reach our destination, that is what I believe in, Ankur.
    Lovely lines these....

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  7. Life is Journey to enjoy...Good Times give us happiness and hard times give us experiences... :)
    Nice One Ankur... (h)

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  8. Two roads to cross and the reality poem. Nice one!

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  9. wonderful poem.. some deep meaning. inspiring..

    hey.. I share my award moment with you... enjoy.. my wishes.. :)
    http://ratnibbles.blogspot.in/2013/09/my-award-moment.html

    have a great weekend.

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    1. Thank you .. thank you .. :) sure will check !

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  10. From 'waking up' onwards, poem is on another level. Ending couplet is brilliant.

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