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Today I’m handing you an unedited version of myself. Do you know what hurts? Heartbreak no. Looking at you hurts, because I badly want to hold your hand and stare at you; and know what it feels like not to be the window pane anymore, but I can’t. These Hours of a wait to dawn upon the moments hurts where I type in an “I MISS YOU” but then I delete letter upon letter with fragments of myself and my emotions and replaces it with “GOOD NIGHT” denying the fact that I’m forever enslaved to the path you once crossed.


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  1. call it coincidence, but my post for today was on letting go...and here, i find this protagonist struggling so hard to let go.... beautifully worded as always...

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    1. isn't letting go is the easiest choice ? but sometime something is worth fighting for .. though sometime you have you especially after reading your post .. Thank you :)

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  2. beautifully worded as always :) .. but seriously you do that ?

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    1. nah .. just a write up :) Thank you :)

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  3. Quite a struggle, wanting to say I miss you, but having to swallow your words. Nicely done!

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  4. " I’m forever enslaved to the path you once crossed."

    perfect choice of words..great ..

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  5. It crossed my heart. Such a crude expression of emotion. Loved it.

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    1. some emotions are like that .. thank you :)

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  6. That's the way we hide what we wanna say... I feel it's best to say & regret...
    Wonderful as usual, Ankur :)

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    1. yeah it's is just a writeup .. thank you :)

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  7. wow.....loved the way you have written your pain in lines..painful but awesum :-)

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  8. So much in the few lines.
    Very well written.

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  9. short and poignant with meaning :)

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