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I was so caught in silver afternoon trance that I thought I can understand all-contained unspoken thoughts of yours before it comes from those pink slippers lips, perhaps I could grasp it from the hazel eyes of yours, but I didn’t, not really. The halves that I understood was only the smudginess of your kohl and semi-precious eagerness of yours that halved me into half. I didn’t realize, I didn’t know that two paths diverged in those mirror utopia, with nothing but the visible spectrum of in-between bits, towards the memory of whole bits of you and gory bits of me. 



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  1. That was precious piece of writing. The emotions that you caught in a few lines.

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  2. that halved me into half.... is a tremendously powerful line! loved it!

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  3. wow Ankur .. how beautifully you convey emotions .. !
    charmer :)

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  4. Short and powerful post ..enjoyed reading it...

    hey I changed that theme by the way..respect your honest opinion.. :-)

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    1. Thank you :) .. i believe visual aspect also makes good blogs :)

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  5. Mystery of love reflected through eyes. Interesting!

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    1. yeah i always finds eyes interesting :)

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  6. Bits and bits unite to create the whole story- it takes two to tango.
    Nice one, Ankur.

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  7. always love the way you express love and emotions.. too good :)

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    1. I hope it's blown to right place :d Thank you :)

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