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An unconsciousness sailed through me seeing you sitting at the edge of your seat with elbows resting on your knees as you started talking to me. I began to search for myself in your flowing lines, within your heaven of adverbs and nouns that sometimes escaped into oblivion. I saw shimmering belted star in your smile telling me many named winter myths, burning meteor sailing over thousand stratospheric mile to be Kohl of your eye. Every second in a delicate frame, suddenly I realized I had something to lose, because my constellations are made up of every little conversations we had.

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  1. pain of separation and romanticism .. burning meteor becoming Kohl of her eye, shimmering belted star in her smile and then my constellations are made up of every little conversations we had .. hayee x-) .. you are writing so beautifully these days Ankur !

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    1. Thank you so much :) .. i was writing beautifully earlier too .. it just that you never read :p jokes apart again thank you :)

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  2. How touching... We build our constellations just with one person!
    Hope we all get this kind of love, Ankur!

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    1. Thank you .. eventually we all do that .. hopefully :)

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  3. that was some cosmic connection!! and the kohl lined eyes make a reappearance? !!! :) :P

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    1. yup .. i always like kohl lined eyes it gives so much space to be creative as well as pleasure to see something so beautiful :) :))

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  4. So much in such small lines...I saw the space, words and love and liked this line "heaven of adverbs and nouns" something unique in your writing :)

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  5. Wow, how beautifully did you capture emotions! Brilliant :)

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    1. Some comments has the power to make you wordless .. Thank you :)

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  6. one more beautiful piece of writing, Ankur. loved it.. <3 :)

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    1. Thank you so much for liking it that much meera :)

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  7. Wonderful buddy! You created magic out of words. Truly awesome.

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    1. magic can be seen only by those who really believe there is something like that :) Thank you !

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  8. Wow.. Last line was awesome !!! :)

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  9. Cosmic connections and love.... I saw space nd yet earth too from your words ;)

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    1. i always believe there are some .. i'm glad that it happened :) Thank you !

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  10. oh d pain of separation! dat was touching! i loved d kohl line a lot :-D

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