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She !

sketchofgirl


She’s beautiful
in way love poems live in our hearts
She’s high on heels
and high on booze

Hazel eye, feathery eyelid, Tinted pink cheeks
and red hues lips
she’s perfect like a character from a holy books.


She’s beautiful,
deep down to her soul,
She’s fun, she’s crazy
but her sorrow is what she – conceal.



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  1. Brace yourself .. flirtatious comment are on their way for her .. :p .. btw loved the last two line .. she seems so beautiful to me from your words .. and hey congrats on your first job .. :)

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    1. hahaha.. not a problem for me .. rather i would be proud :p .. thanks :)

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  2. So very poignant but a woman is like that, she hides everything in her. Beautiful expression.

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  3. Its like a treat to read you every time .. what a comparison "character from a holy book" and hats off for last four line .. you have said so much ..so beautiful :)

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  4. Well written on 'She'. The last two lines so perfect!

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  5. I am wordless...... dunno why I could connect this with myself..... :)

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  6. the sorrow concealed under a cheerful face.. i dono but i too feel like i am in a way connected to that one line.. jus wonderful. :)

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    1. thats a delight people feeling connected with this.. thats what i guess every writer want i guess .. :) thank you :)

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  7. any woman would be pleased as punch to have a man say all these wonderful things to her!!! ur earning a lot of brownie points here buddy!!

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