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Enchantress !

SUN,DARKNIGHT,BEAUTIFUL,SCENERY


There is this girl when you begin to know her, you will feel you have a galaxy of “I love you’s” inside of you to spill onto her and if you will look into her eyes really you will realize those two brilliant kohl lined eyes actually makes an infinity, and gives you forever within a fraction of a second. She may not be most stunning and gorgeous, but she is God’s beautiful work of art; radiating aliveness into your soul because she is what Charles Bukowski meant when he said “Find what you love and let it kill you”.





[P.S- Those who have heard the "Q jaanu Na(initial one paragraph version)" the song that i wrote and posted few daysback as  100th post here is a link you can download the studio version of it Download (full song) . Do give your feedback though its not too good i must admit but since its the first one so i'm sharing it shamelessly :D ]

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  1. I love this as usual, Ankur :)
    It's really good. I wanna meet this girl now:)

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    1. Thank you :)
      now ? even i haven't met her till now .. :d ..

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    2. I guess the Universe will conspire to make U meet her :)
      Do introduce then! :)

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    3. Someday ! yeah definitely :)

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  2. WoW Ankur ! i don't know what to say about you writing now .. :)
    Really a lucky girl she is !

    Even the song is so nice ,, "yaado mai hai bas teri hi parchhayian
    par ye dooriya bhi to hai darmiyaan
    Q jaanu Na" oh how lovely you write and a very nice music :)

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    1. google some of the word :p jokes apart thank you for reading and listening that song :) ..

      i guess luckiness will be mutual once i get to know such girl :))

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  3. Seems like a very lucky girl. She has found the right person who looks right through her :)
    Lovely piece of writing.

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    1. seemingly i haven't been so lucky to meet one till now .. !
      Thank you so much :)

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  4. she will be lucky ankur...once u meet her because men are often accused of being stingy with words, being less expressive, not showering praise etc etc.....but dating a writer like you who scores 100% on all accounts, she will surely be one lucky lady!!!

    btw, lovely lines!

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    1. after reading this my mind did a little bit of *nagin dance* :d thank you so much for such token of appreciation :)

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  5. Would like to know more about the girl Ankur....nicely written.. :)

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  6. You can be shameless about it :P and hey im sure you have met her :P we shall keep ur secret :P

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    1. a secret remains only when you keep it with yourself only isn't it ? :p

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  7. Beautiful as always... Lucky girl!! :)

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  8. I love it when men can write emotions so beautifully.

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    1. i guess every people who can express are loved :) thank you for reading :)

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  9. Love it absolutely! Such few words and such deep emotions!

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  10. that is lovely as always ankur :)

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  11. This was beautiful. And the last line - Amazing !!

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