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The Rejected Deliverance !

Deliverance, infidelity .


Sometime I feel,
Why can’t I speak,
of the sky
and the worlds that I see
Perhaps my words are as
little as me.

I see oceans so deep,
filled with broken people’s love weep;
Clouds so dark
because of the rain that break their heart;
A flying ship, stars that can shoot,
Perhaps my life is best spent astute.

I see vast blue skies,
blue due to million spoken lies;
Poor planets cries in form of rains,
for the moon when his/her heart pains;
but they heals with dry eyes and their rings again spin,
Perhaps my patience runs thin.

I see flow of God’s art,
art that can rip your heart apart;
Sparks so tiny,
Engulfing a forest into flames huge and shiny;
A foes that can fry, friends that can fight,
Perhaps my waifs never outlast after night.

I see a seeming sad, silent moan,
inside holding a mighty teary cyclone;
Waves rising so high,
just to last for a minute before they die;
but tonight I speak,
and writes this rejected bleak,

because the dark-space is nigh,
and about to attack;
with so much to see; so much more sky,
fate wouldn’t bring me back
as vast hope will again capture me,
in some another sea.

But tonight I speak,
because in dark my freedom is at peak.


Comments

  1. Loved each and every word.. Awesome :)

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  2. the first two lines of each para/stanza or whatever (not a poet :) ) was brilliantttt.
    The whole poem was amazing but the two lines, were like cherry on the cake.

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  3. "art that can rip ur heart apart"....what play of words!! brilliant!

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  4. awesome..the opening stanza is brilliant...so expressive .....

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  5. i like the way you put emotions while describing the god's art. very good writing! :) hope you become a voracious poet someday ;)

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  6. opening and each stanza is so wonderful .. but the way you pictured gods wrath .. in these line I see flow of God’s art,
    art that can rip your heart apart;
    Sparks so tiny,
    Engulfing a forest into flames huge and shiny; and then the vast hope will again capture me,
    in some another sea.
    Just brilliant Ankur :) actually now i wonders your imagery power with every new writing !

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  7. Great choice of words and flow!
    Very well written Ankur!

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  8. So much dejection & pain in this world...
    Sad we have to see. Lovely expression, Ankur.
    But, hope will triumph! May darkness bring light.

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    1. darkness always brings light :) Thank you so much :)

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  9. impactful ..:) loved the flow of the poem..!

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  10. Words and Ankur go hand in hand :)... Well written poem!

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    1. ah ! i wish for this better never happens ! Thank you so much :)

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  11. The second paragraph - Just amazing. As always :)

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  12. Ah! I am glad I finally dropped by your site to be welcomed with such a melody of words! You are a great poet who pens emotions beautifully Ankur! :)

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  13. Wow Ankur what more can I say? Jus Brilliant, man :)

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    1. Google some words :d .. Jokes apart thank you so much :)

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  14. that's an enchanting poem with lovely imagery and words. Last lines are awesome!

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